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Equality: What does it mean to you? (Grade 12)
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ReplyDeleteknow that the commentary is more than 200 word and i couldn't write it shorter, But next time i'll try write less words.
ReplyDeleteWorld war (ll)
ReplyDeleteIn these days every single person believes and knows that war word two has happened but do they question themselves when did it happen and the reason behind. Germany started world war two by invading Poland on September 1st 1939 that was led by Adolf Hitler and his Nazi party, the main cause of world two were numorse they include the impact of treaty of Versailles the most imported reason that causes world war two, the worldwide economic depression , failure of appeasement , the rise of militarism in Germany and Japan.
It’s was the most deadliest war that killed around 70 millions people , the fight in WW2 where between the Axies powers and the Allied powers the fight was mostly in Europe and lasted for six bloody years until the Allies defeated Nazi Germany and Japan in 1945.
Did you ever ask yourself is Adolf Hitler good or bad person? Yes he’s the reason is that he and his national socialist party armed the nation and signed several strategic treaties to dominate the world, but people never thinks that winners make history that literally mentioned in books that have been read by important people. Hitler’s death was suicide.
Thinking of how did world war two ended , it’s end on September 2, 1949 . Japan is the last country to be defeated in world war ll after the atomic bombings of Nagasaki and Hiroshima resulted in the surrender of Japan and the lifting of the US flag in Tokyo and that was the end of world war two.
our knowledge came from faith in teachers and writers such as Patrick J.Buchanan’s that wrote about WW(ll)and article that mentions World War two also faith in parent especially grandparents ( but not all the time because they are old people and may give you wrong information) so people must lead to books and articles even google to see and know about world war two.
Art
ReplyDeleteArt, what is art? Art is actually a lie that's going to bring you closer to the truth. Art is normally equated too creative way, to show or tell thoughts and emotions , or let me say it in a good way its to express your emotions it's sort of reaction that a human being shows.
By saying art is a lie, lie is telling that something is not real,but what is emotion by expressing their drawing, so art ia a beautiful lie, it's a lie because its where every issues, emotions and so on is hidden behind a beautiful colors and lovely images.
Art contain a strong history that left for all the people now a day to see. They've drawing of what happen in their day back then and most people say or let me say it like this its a common belief that there is no knowledge in art because of the different perspective. But from what I see and what people need to see is that art has a story in every painting an artist painted them because it shows lots of emotions and tells lots of stories .
So therefore in conclusion we can say that there is a great deal of knowledge in art but its hidden and out of clear sight and this is what makes art exciting and almost like a mystery. Because it contains lots of emotion and lots of history .
Okay so most people will say how can you see that there is an emotion in an artwork, how can you explain it ? the answer for that is if you actually know the person who painted the art work life you will see immediately the emotion you will catch feelings every artist is different than the other one and every artist tell their own emotions . or even if you were alone and saw a painting just ask yourself what do you see you will tell a story by just seeing the painting even though it was just a flower or an animal it will still tell a story and it will have emotions.
Is God Real ?
ReplyDeleteA question that humans have been asking themselves since the beginning of time. Science is predicted on the causal relationships described in the principle of causality. Every effect has a cause ; everything that begins changes is limited and has a cause. The universe began to exist and changing over time and someday will come to an end. The universe began to exist, so something else must have caused it to exist.
The cause is God
When we look around at the universe, life,plants,animals and ourselves we see signs of the intelligence and design so there must be a designer. Assuming that the intelligence created these perfect conditions require far less faith than believing that life sustaining earth just happened.
The more scientists know the more amazed they get at how fragile and so finely calibrated everything is for the universe to come into existence.
God has revealed himself to us through words written. Quran,the Bible,Torah and told us what we want to know who we are and the purpose of us , of our lives and why we are here.
Why do we buy bottled water ?
ReplyDeleteAs we know that water is an important thing for human body . Without water a person can't stay alive and survive . So water must be provided for free to drink . An example oxygen or air must be out there so human beings can breathe in without it all human beings have to die .
If air is free to breath and you don’t pay for it , also water must be free . These days you must buy a bottle to drink ‘pure’ water , but if I am in a country with safe drinking water ‘tap water’ why should I buy bottled water . Also there have been testing on tap water and its the same as the bottled water we buy .
Easily the answer would be is marketing that provides bottled water marketed for use cleaner and tastier than regular tap water , but there’s no wrong about drinking tap water . The companies convinced consumers to pay for water by using words and phrases such as ‘pure’ , ‘natures best’ , ‘natural’ , ‘pure life’ and displaying snow-capped mountains . But I am against buying bottled water in a safe drinking water from the tap . But other people have different views , when you’re heading out it's just easier to grab a bottle of water out of the fridge instead of taking the time to put some ice and water into a mug .
A clear liquid that has no smell, taste or color that used for drinking, cooling, and washing that called water.
DeleteWater is the most important component of life and t is needed in many ways, if there would be no water then there would be no life in earth.
But why should we pay for water
because we should pay for water as long as the money is generated for along clear supply that doesn’t have to be boiled .
Because not olé the water that we drink is haved been suctioned and filled some of it goes in difficult proses as being filtered from the sea or goes in distillate operation that cost a lot of energy in which more money.
If we didn’t pay for water no one will bother to make water and most of our wells will eventually dry out
In this day the population of people has been increast to a number that makes people fight for water so if the water is free most people will waste it because of why it free.
Moon landing
ReplyDeleteAs all people know Neil Armstrong, Buzz Aldrin, and Micheal Collin were the first three astronauts to land successfully on the moon on July 20,1969 with the spaceship Apollo11.
Moon landing was fake. Everyone was fooled by this historical scene made by Americans to be the first to reach space before the Soviet Union to develop aerospace capabilities.
The reasons why it was fake because in every picture there were no stars. They shot all photos from the moon but there was not a single star. They also had a flag with them to keep it there and the flag was moving like there was wind while there is no air on the moon.
The only light that will be on the moon's surface will be sunlight, so shadows will be in one direction while the pictures showed different directions of shadows which looks like they were using studio lights.
When Armstrong and Aldrin landed on the “moon” there were footsteps. But when they used a vehicle there were no traces!
Humans reached the moon before 50 years when technology was not good enough but now when everything is better and they have better spaceships they can’t? This shows that all of the moon landing is fake.
Finally, the moon has atomic radiation and radiation layers which makes it impossible to pass through these layers without getting cancer or skin ulcers but all three astronauts were unharmed.
These are reasons that me and other people see which makes moon landing fake.
World War(l)
ReplyDeleteWorld War 1 or also known as the Great War. It start at 28 July 1914 and ended at 11 November 1918. It was an international conflict when most of the Europen Countries were in this war,even Russia ,USA,and Middle East and other countries.The war started when the Crown Prince was assassinated with his wife by an Sarbian student but my
grandparents said that WW1 started when all the countries had a limited resource so they must pick a war to have more resources but they covered this reason by saying a Sarbian student killed the Crown Prince and his wife.
Austria announced a war against Serbia and Russia announced a war against Austria, Where Germany announced a war against Russia, so if the fact the student killed the Crown Prince and his wife ,Russia will never announce against Austria and Germany Won't announce against Russia, so this shows that there is something that Russia and Germany they don't have.
During the war the countries divided into two parts: the Allied powers which was led by British Empire and the Central Powers which was led by the German Empire. The war occupy for 4 years. Allied powers won the war so they wrote the history of WW1 . People did not see the other side of the story from the Central Powers but my believe on my Grandparents.
What is human beauty?‘a combination of qualities, such as shape, colour, or form that pleases the aesthetic senses, especially the sight'?Or according to psychology, it's a combination of inner beauty includes psychological factors such as personality, intelligence, and outer beauty?
ReplyDeleteWhy is it mostly physical? Why is there such a standard? The term "beautiful people" is used to refer to those who closely follow trends in fashion, physical appearance, food, wine, and real estate, often at a considerable financial cost. So a normal person with a nice personality and grace are not considered beautiful?
Studies show attractive patients receive more personalized care from their doctors. Handsome criminals receive lighter sentences than less attractive convicts. It got to the point where people low in physical attractiveness earn 5 to 10 per cent less than ordinary looking people, who in turn earn 3 to 8 per cent less than those who are considered good looking.
No matter how you look, or what people say, you are who you are. Be confident in yourself. Confidence makes that person become more beautiful and charming in their own way without even trying so hard. Confidence changes the way a character carry oneself, they become more ambitious, reliable and independent.
HISTORY-WWII
ReplyDeleteWorld war 2 happened in sep 11939 , World war 2 ended at sep 21945 and world war 2 ended with the unconditional surrender of the Axis powers. On 8 may 1945, the Allies accepted Germanys surrender , about a week after Adolf Hitler and committed suicide. VE Day- Victory in Europe celebrates the end of the second world war on 8 may 1945.
This is not the case , people believe that Adolf Hitler is the bad soldier but never thought that the winners wrote the ending and made history thinking that they were the hero’s and saved the world
Our believe came from our grandparents that were alive when world war 2 happened but their story is different from the books and history. They said world war 2 ended before Hitler committed suicide, The suicide was that he knows his soldier were dyeing and English world treated him so badly.
I am a book believer because I have faith in the writer Patrick J. Buchanan’s but respect people who believe their grandparents {if they didn’t have zahimer}.We must not turn to grandparents because they are old might give you wrong information people must go back to old books and experts.
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ReplyDeleteWhy do players paid so much?
ReplyDeleteNow this day the players are much more valuable than before. Now a day they get paid a lot much per month for e.g Messi best player in the world get paid 7 million, but back in the days there where not valuable like now. The players get paid much more than any jobs just for playing one of the easiest jobs to work for.
I can understand that it comes from the clubs and financial resources and sells of tickets and t-shirt, players became more popular and so more profitable.the right for the first season of the Premier league in 1992-97 sold less than 200 millions. The TV rights for 2016-19 are in comparison more than 5 billion. If the people are not interest in football, clubs would not be able to make this profit. The value of players would drop and so would their wages.
I don’t think that they need to get paid this much, it way overpaid for the players . I think that they need to reduce the value, like 50-200 thousand so they can equalize with the other jobs
The Story Behind Van Gogh’s Death
ReplyDeleteVincent Van Gogh was born on the 30 of march year 1853 he was dutch, specifically from Zundert, a village in the southern province of North Brabant in Netherland. Vincent was a post-impressionist painter who is among the most famous and influential figures in the history of Western art. In just over a decade he created about 2,100 artworks including 860 oil paintings, most of it were from the last two years of his life.
In a true intuitive form, Van Gogh eschewed traditional painting techniques in favor of creating from his imaginative impressions; his lush, emotions-fueled paintings captures the creativity and depth of his introvert personality and life. That has affected him in so many ways, that made him have a fear of abandonment; his father's death, his love that couldn’t been accepted and other complicated relationships.
From what has been heard about Vincent that he went overboard in everything he did, and thus managed to alienate people by his nervous, over-excited and often quarrelsome nature.
In one of the summers Vincent went back to live with his father again.
During that period, he met his cousin Cornelia Adriana Vos Trixes (called Kee). Kee (1846-1918) became a widow recently raising her young son alone. Vincent fell in love with Kee and his feelings were shattered when he got rejected by her, which became one of the most prominent incidents in his life. Vincent then decided to confront her in her parent’s home. Kee's father refused to allow Vincent to see his daughter. Vincent's goal was to put his hand on the flame to allow him to see Kee, but her father quickly turned off the lamp, and Vincent left the house humiliating.
Despite emotional setbacks with Ki and personal tensions with her father, Vincent found some encouragement from Anton Mauve (1838 - 1888), his cousin to marry. Mauve made himself a successful artist, and from his home in The Hague, Vincent supplied his first collection of watercolors, so Vincent began to work with colors. Vincent was very impressed with the work of Mauve and was grateful to him. Their relationship was good, but the two soon fell out, partly because Mauve was scandalized by Vincent's relationship with Sien Hoornik, a pregnant prostitute who already had an illegitimate child. In September 1883 he decided to break off the relationship with Sien and follow in the footsteps of artists like Van Rappard and Mauve by trying his luck in the picturesque eastern province of Drenthe..but it didn’t go well with him and he went back to live with his parents.
Van Gogh suffered from psychotic episodes and delusions and though he worried about his mental stability, he often neglected his physical health, did not eat properly and drank heavily. His friendship with Gauguin (his close friend) ended after a confrontation with a razor when, in a rage, he severed part of his own left ear. He spent time in psychiatric hospitals, including a period at Saint-Remy. After he discharged himself and moved to the Auberge Ravoux in Auvers-sur-Oise near Paris, he came under the care of the homeopathic doctor Paul Gachet. His depression continued and on 27 July 1890, Van Gogh shot himself in the stomach with a
Lefaucheux revolver. Its either by himself or by someone. He died from his injuries two days later.
DeleteVan Gogh tried suicide more than once but failed every time.
There’s many theories about Vincent’s death, and that it was a murder. But from what mostly heard about, and in that time ‘suicide’ was regarded as sinful; which is why the church in Auvers refused to allow its hearse to be used to carry Van Gogh’s body up the hill to the cemetery. And why would the grieving Theo have accepted the death of his dearly loved brother as suicide and not murder?
Done by: Yaqeen Almaamri
DeleteNatural Science – The selected Areas of knowledge:
ReplyDeleteNatural science is one of the eight areas of knowledge and also it includes wide range of science fields, which deals with the physical world. Physics, Mathematics, Chemistry, Geology and biology are all included and considered as part of the natural science area of knowledge. The scope of this area differs from others as it is the most objective and standardized field. Natural sciences differ from human and social sciences as it deals objectively with finding best explanation of the events and surroundings of living and non-living things around the world. Although studying human body and physiology is part of natural science but studying human behavior and social life is different and do not fall in the scope and category of natural science.
Natural science area of knowledge has its own terminologies and specific language used for its expressions. Certain words used in mathematics and physics such as “Tolerance” can mean something different from social life field. In addition, many well-known languages have been passed through generations specially in science in which most terminologies come from Latin language.
Natural science methodology uses the scientific method in order to reach conclusions. Although scientific method is a standardized way of reasoning, science is still a material able to change over times as per the evolution of technology and other sources of knowledge.
Why should we have faith in Authority?
ReplyDeleteThe last decade or two came a generation that really made the people of the world to have a different perspective in of thinking about everything around them starting from doubting what’s wrong and what’s right and from doubting about their very existence.
Because of the different impacts of social media and its diverse content this generation children and teenagers are getting ideas that have never crossed a mind of an elder before these ideas not only stop at their border of their self-awareness but are carried out as movements that are planning things that are not been ever heard of.
The flat earth movement is one of those things that started as an idea and now are carried out as a series scientific research program that is getting enormous funds from all around the world that are believers of this cause. day after day the growth of this movements is getting bigger and bigger because a lot of influencers are believers of this movement. Now the funds are so big that they are planning to go to space and see for their self if the earth is flat or round.
What do you think of this is the earth round or flat or its same shape that no being ever thought about it?
How to know the earth is round?
ReplyDeletethe evidence that human used to know the earth's sphere all the planets we abserve whether by naked eye or by telescope are spherical
the presence of night in one part of the globe and day in other part at the same time indicates the spherical earth. so hwo we can explane thid phenomenon in the presence of the flat land?
note that hurricanes very according to their area of existance they rotate right in the northan part
of the glope and rotate left in southern section so is swirt of water, whether in the sea oe even in the bathtub of the house the movement of the earth effects it direction.
there are studies that say: if we you walk 10,000km 90 right then 10000 90 up then 10,000 90 km left will end at point you started from that's mean a triangle with 3 angles of 90 only takes place on a spherical surface *on a spherical surface onlyyyy.
the altitude of the sun is diffrerent as we move away from equator, so we can also calculate the sphericality of the earth by using this phenomenon using the stick and recording the lenght of the shadow and after the stick apart we can calculate of the diameter of the earth
and there is study that say: the shape of the stars changes between two parts of the earth the shape of the stars we see in canada is inverted in australlia
and i've heard befor about "magellan" he is traveller and explorer has made several achivments leading the first eurpen voyage around the world he was sailed west and remaind spell west until his boat reahed the point were he set off "he died on the road but his boat arrived"
if we look at disant ship on the horozion. we will only see it's top section "and that what greek scientist said the same phenomenon" we can see in the big lakes like watching chicago from lake michigan "we will able to see only hight skyscapers"
and when the lunar eclips accur we will see that the shadow on the moon is always spherical .
the first to dicover spherical earth .
research say that : in the middle of the fourth century, the greek philosopher "plato" in 348BC proposed the theory of the spherical earth for the first time, but he didn't recive enough support from the after math and this remaind more guss .
then in the fifteenth century AD, the russian scientist "nicolas kubrinks" conculded that the earth is spherical and that isn't the center of the universe but church didn't publish his book only on his deathbed .
in the same period scientist "friedenand magellan" *i was mentioned his name befor* and his student "juan substian elcano" issued partcal descriptions of the earth's sphere starting from their voyage during which they traveled hemisphere. what looks like an egg
-so there is many scientfic reaserches about the earth make me belive the earth is a circular .